Feedback from Mel

After having our first review with Mel, she gave us the following feedback:

• Adjust the framing of some of the performance shots. There is a particular close up of our frontman which is a bit off.
• Make more clear the relationship between Rory and the band. The intention is that the band is essentially apathetic towards him, but this could be made clearer.
• Use more shots of the drums. The song is very driven by drumming, because Travis Barker is God. For this reason we need to put more emphasis on the heavier drum rolls and such.
• Get the frontman to look down the lens more often.

That's pretty much it.