Pitch feedback/First post

So this is all the feedback we were given from our pitch yesterday which is also our first post. Happy days.

Since this is the first post I think it's worth saying the song we're doing is Natives, a new track from the pop punk band Blink 182.

So, list of the feedback given:

• Clear Narrative
• Mugging needs to look convincing other wise will look tacky
• Love the idea of using tins and boxes as drums
• very intersting clear narrative
• Love the idea of instruments being old objects
• Make sure it's convincing
• Good idea, fits well with band
• Smashing objects up will be hard to refilm as we won't get many chances
• Interesting storyline
• Good idea, might be hard to get destruction scenes right
• Fast paced song, might be hard for out performers to play
• Blink 182 are crazy! (not really relevant but we liked that one)
• We will need good convincing actors or it will look tacky

So overall, we got pretty good feedback. The main concern people have is making it all look properly convincing, which Sarah and myself have been concious of from the begininning. We won't accept any tacky looking takes, which may lose us a lot of friends.